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Lisa Maguire's avatar

The slow motion disaster is what makes this story so compelling for me. The details are extraordinary-- the discounted dresses, the removal of the movie posters... And burlap bags falling from the sky makes for a dreamlike apocalypse. Great writing.

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Karen Packard Rhodes's avatar

Fascinating story, and well-written. The images of people's belongings being hauled to the schools to be stored upstairs, of the sandbags being filled, and more are engaging. You've given us a very human story that was a fine read. The flood coming at the town the way you describe it is like a hurricane coming at us in Florida. One would not think Florida is a place that floods, but it does -- usually brought to us by hurricanes. I grew up in Jacksonville, Florida, from the time my mother brought me and my brother and sister here 71 years ago. I've seen floods here many times, some worse than others.

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